Wow! I can see why you were waiting for a professional editor and not just a Reader. I had to agree the edits were perfect and the problems with the four POV did confuse me--and --when Boston happened I didn't remember this foretelling in the beginning--of what Sam did. I think Anna has a heart she has buried in cement to protect herself. And I NEVER saw Jack as a killer but maybe I will see it in the second half.What are you thinking about regarding what they had to say about Hope?