progress

From a printed synopsis I've been able to shuffle scenes around so things start making sense, see the gaping holes where I've kidded myself with "I'll flesh that out later" and killed a few gems of self-indulgence babbling


It's really too raw to call it a rough draft, but I don't know a better word for it.


Now the idle traffic light diversion is finding a title. Can you imagine? All this time having no name for a project that's taken up so much mental energy?


I used to look at a textile piece in progress and the title would pop out of my mouth without a bead of sweat forming on my brow!



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