In the writer's group I belong to one member put forth the notion that all you get from an editor reading your manuscript is 250 words before they roll their eyes up in their heads and pitch it in the trash or hit "delete".
I did some grubbing around on the web but couldn't find any yeas or nays to corroborate this, but it wouldn't surprise me. I won't let it bother me much either.
Maybe I should have called this blog "Honing the Hook" but that sounds vaguely pornographic, which, given the genre I'm attempting, is not all that far off the mark.
I was rummaging through old notebooks with the intention of not letting them go to waste when I found the dry leaves and the hard cash in the notebook that holds the bones of my first two novels, both patiently waiting their turn while I get this one done. I pissed the money away on lottery tickets..keep you posted on that one.
Then, in a spiral lined notebook I came across this written in pencil so light it had to be a 4H, my old dear favorite from a very long time ago.
"The 11th Commandment"
Thou shalt heed these my commandments, not out of fear of the Lord's retribution, but in the certain knowledge that He has given you the ability to weigh your actions, the wisdom to foresee the consequences and the strength to live with the outcome."
And under this, "see your options"
WTF? I checked it in Grammarly. It's sui generis. What was I smoking?